Dear Seema,
I hope you are doing well and healthy. I received your letter regarding suggestions for your landmark birthday party. I am more than honoured to help you decide to make it a memorable day for you.
I think it would be a good idea to conduct the party at The Lake Town celebration hall, where we can also enjoy the scenic view of the lake. Moreover, they are also running their 10th year anniversary discounts. It would be a great deal to catch. Since everyone would be working on that day, it would be convenient to keep it in the evening and since you always wanted a Bollywood themed party it would be a splendid idea to have it one this time. At the end you could declare the best-dressed actor/actress as well. I know a spectacular music artist who also has a professional orchestra team, he plays all the songs from jazz to pop. We hired him at my Neice's birthday last year and he was flawless. I am sure you will like him.
I hope I was of some help. If there is anything more you would want to ask, you can call me anytime.
Yours lovingly,
Amy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... to make it a memorable day for you. I think it would be a good idea to conduc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33663366337 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47423741766 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653465346535 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5679964442 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.5714285714 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4285714286 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167946389886 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558397917617 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717433652032 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091953785174 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517442235963 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.3 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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