Dear Monty,
The last time I was in your home country, Tanzania, you really made my stay a memorable one and since then I've been looking forward to an opportunity to reciprocate your kind gestures. To this end, I am writing this letter to you to invite you to come witness one of the most popular festivals in my country called the Durban Festival.
The Durban Festival is an annual event which takes place in Kwara state, which is located in the North-Central part of Nigeria on the 29th October. It's a festival that is characterized by vivid displays of colors, horse riding, and the peak of the ceremony is the King, in the company of his families and royal blood lines march through the market. And the market women voluntarily give out their wares to the royal bloods.
I also plan to take you to other important landmarks in my country during your visit. We will be going to Erin-Ijesa waterfall, which is the tallest waterfall in Africa. The next day, we will visit the Ikogosi warm spring, which is a popular tourist destination for foreigners as people coming into the country to see the spot where the hot spring water meets with the cold spring water to give warm spring water. Also, I will treat you to a lot of my country's local cuisines, especially Amala and Ewedu that you've always talked about. You will definitely fall in love with every moment you'll spend in my country.
Fingers crossed, you will be able to make it. See you soon.
Your Sincerely.
Khay
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, really, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 264.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60984848485 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40513003434 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.7030896737 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.416666667 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225284177614 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826362031147 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797877204262 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106508264163 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679532663631 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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