Write a letter to your friend who lives in another town, and invite him/her to a party you are going to organise.
In your letter explain:
why are you having this party
who are expected to be present at the party
give directions on how to get there.
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Neha,
How are you? I hope you are healthy and happy. What about the result of your M.B.A course? I am glad to tell you that I have got a distinction in my M.Sc. course and would like you to be present at a party I am throwing to commemorate the event on 25th August.
I am planning for a small party at my home this coming Sunday, 25th August. I would like to invite you to the party and I really want to see you on that day. I have invited all our childhood friends, hence it would be a get-together party for all of us. This party will definitely be a good reason to meet.
Last year I moved into a new apartment which is in Satellite area of the city and I hope you have my address. It is very easy to find my residence. First, you should reach the Satellite area, main road and towards the left of the entrance, you will find a shopping mall called KH 24; from there you should come straight away and you will find my apartment. I have sent you my coordinates at Google Maps in your email.
However, if you have any difficulty in finding my address, just call me. I will send my cousin for your help. See you at the party then.
Best wishes,
Yash
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...appy. What about the result of your M.B.A course? I am glad to tell you that I ha...
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Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sc
...u that I have got a distinction in my M.Sc. course and would like you to be presen...
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Line 9, column 159, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d I really want to see you on that day. I have invited all our childhood friends,...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, really, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.18777292576 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25142945975 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554585152838 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1552477758 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.9375 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3125 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6875 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326923412878 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118459597321 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697058592382 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22241900465 0.12726935374 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305922526531 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.43 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.4 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.