Write a letter to your friend, who is visiting a city that you are familiar with
1) Describe to him the place orth visiting.
2) Eating Options
3) Transport Options
Hi John,
Hope you are doing good. I am happy to hear that you along with your friends have planned to visit the historic city, Surat next month.
Surat is a beautiful city. Since I have stayed there for six months during my first job, I ll suggest you some of the wonderful places to explore. Make sure you visit the science museum, the lake garden, statue of unity and the club Utopia, which is constructed on ancient India theme. Moreover, there are a number of beautiful shopping mall where u can visit vivid designer stores and famous local brands.
As you are going during winters to visit this historic city, try the authentic Gujarati food that serves special food items. Apart from this, you ought to try the mouth watering breakfast that is served in the early morning at the city center near railway station.
Exploring the city is best when traveled via private cab. Apart from this, you can also take the local bus and BRTS (bus rapid transport system) system which travels to every corner of the city. Furthermore, recently the city council has developed a special cycling route where you can rent a bicycle that has a map and shows you the desired route to travel five famous tourists places.
Hope you will have a blast with your friends while exploring Surat.
If you want any other information, let me know. I ll be happy to assist you.
Best Regards
Ram
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...s during my first job, I ll suggest you some of the wonderful places to explore. Make sure ...
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Line 15, column 137, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: system
... local bus and BRTS bus rapid transport system system which travels to every corner of the ci...
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Line 25, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e know. I ll be happy to assist you. Best Regards Ram
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7387755102 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14203677202 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632653061224 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4809997313 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174448705628 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552706833989 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336431823039 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955821157028 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264415975893 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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