Dear Igor,
I am ecstatic to know that you are finally visiting Zurich after a lot of persuasion from my end. I have certain things to bring in to your knowledge before you leave for the said trip.
Firstly, I would want to tell you that Zurich is an amazing city and can charm you in its beauty. However, do not forget that there is a lot to see in the city and suburban areas of the city. There is not much to see in the city centre apart from the church and the lake that passes through the city.
Further, I know you are such a foodie and would love to taste some local food. You will be flabbergasted with the variety of food available in the city. As such, I would suggest you try Poutine at French Bakery. It ranks top on my foodie trip.
Above all, do not forget that you should rely on a car rental for commuting in and out of the city. The transport is impressive in the city centre, but the bus services are pretty bad as you step out of the main city. Therefore, rent a car from Driver-u.
I cannot wait to hear about your experience in the city that I love the most.
Good luck,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Igor, I am ecstatic to know that you are final...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, so, therefore, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.17511520737 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10040198647 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557603686636 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5427742469 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.7142857143 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144759312677 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046501825242 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333594850575 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823681339662 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015881553199 0.0580467560999 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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