It is believed that travelling changes you inside out and with every journey that one takes, there is a change waiting to happen within the person itself. A person who has seen different places in the world will appreciate their own city in a very different way. Thus, if I was asked by any foreign visitor who had a day to spend in India and would want to see something, I would undoubtedly suggest them to visit the capital of India.
Firstly, Delhi is one of the biggest cosmopolitans of India and is a mixture of the traditional as well as a modern culture which in itself is an amazing experience for the person visiting the city. In the narrow alleys of Old Delhi, there is so much for one to see that cannot be seen anywhere else in the world. For instance, Old Delhi is in itself a city within a city as traditionally it was locked within the walls of itself and had only 4 gates to enter. Moreover, the kind architecture is impeccable and variety of food options which cannot be found anywhere else in India.
Secondly, Delhi is the capital of India and the hustle and bustle make Delhi a vibrant city. There is a lot a person can do from modern choices to one of the traditional choices. For example, you can find malls, you can find baoli (traditional baths), there are ample of choices available to one person and the best part is that all the above mentioned can be done in less than a day. Therefore, Delhi is a city which can be easily seen in a matter of few hours.
In conclusion, no city in India can surpass the level of Delhi. The city is a unique blend of all the things which we see in other renowned cities across the world which makes it unique and worthy of seeing once in a lifetime.
- You couldn't find a book you need to read in your local area shops. Write a letter to shop owner in another town to enquire about the book. Include the following: 1) Give the details of book you need 2) Why you need it? 3) How will you pay for it? 78
- You organised a 90th birthday party for a relative at a local hotel. There were several elderly guests and the party was very successful. 89
- As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. 67
- You had arranged to meet a friend next week but you have realized that you will not be able to go Write a letter to your friend In your letter Cancel the meeting with your friend and opologize explain why you will not be able to meet your friend suggest w 87
- You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. 64
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33229813665 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41178012765 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493788819876 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0678605262 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.307692308 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0677866537515 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0234958687243 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349538034422 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0418078086119 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349974889087 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.13 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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