Write a letter to your friend who you recently travelled with to a foreign country. Include
Why you enjoyed the trip
What you are doing now
An invitation to visit you now
Dear Jot,
How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. First of all, I would like to thank you for the hospitality that you extended to me during my visit to your nation and also like to invite you to my country.
Well, I can say that I had the most memorable and breathe taking experience during my visit. Your plan to visit Chandigarh was really laudable. I really enjoyed the time we spend in the Rock Garden. I was stunned to see that waste can also result in such beautiful art. Apart from this, the scenic beauty of the lake adjacent to the rock garden was remarkable.
After returning back, I started my job again, and currently, I have moved to Toronto from Alberta. Actually, my company has started a regional branch in Toronto and they asked me to take over the charge of that. The company has allotted me 2bhk flat, well-equipped with all essential amenities.
I would be having a spring break next month and as far as I remember you will also be free at that time. I am my cousins who have planned a hiking trip during those vacations and I was thinking if you can accompany us as I know you are also passionate about hiking. Moreover, we will have enough time to spend together and you can also enjoy the beauty of the place.
I hope you will accept my invitation. Please write me back whenever you come across this letter.
Yours Truly,
Kinu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 7, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returning'.
Suggestion: returning
...the rock garden was remarkable. After returning back, I started my job again, and currently,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, if, moreover, really, so, well, apart from, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 32.9175257732 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 253.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42292490119 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34030816153 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588932806324 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 353.7 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6513575662 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.8235294118 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8823529412 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28230284681 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956336206484 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874748875308 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17046995194 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128248232692 0.0580467560999 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.