Write a letter to your friend from whom you borrowed something that accidentally broke. Please say
– Remind him/her, what have you borrowed
– Explain what happened
– What you will do about it
Dear Mae,
Good day! How are you? Hope you are okay. By the way, this is Maria Judith Parayno, I am currently living at lot 4 Blk 9 Mayon Street, Town and country hills, Brgy. Inarawan Anipolo City. I wrote this letter because I just borrowed a vase from you and I accidentally broke it.
If you remember, before we just got moved into our new house, I borrowed a blue large flower vase to you, because we have an event and that is for our new house blessing that was happened two days after I borrowed it to you. Since we have a big family and lots of kid, Suddenly, my niece Julii accidentally hit your vase and brokes into pieces,. I am very sorry for this inconvenience, but you do not have to worry, because I tried my very best to replace it and successfully, I found a replica or your vase. If it is okay to you, I am now going to order that new vase and deliver it personally on your house.
Hopind for your kind consideration. Thank you and hope to see you soon.
Sincrely yours,
Maria Parayno
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...lly hit your vase and brokes into pieces,. I am very sorry for this inconvenience,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27979274611 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41970576156 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637305699482 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4394706896 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8333333333 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280988788021 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104637879763 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838804182328 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202823870347 0.12726935374 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177244250762 0.0580467560999 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.