HI, Sharad,
Hope you are doing good,I am writing this letter to apologize for something.
You may have remembered that i have borrowed your New Sony Digicam last month on my brother's wedding.
As you know, we have invited too many guests in the wedding ceremony. The celebration took place too long and while shooting with Digi came one of my niece have dropped it on the floor and it's Camera lens were broken. I remember that you have reminded me for precaution while taking that Digi Cam. I am extremely sorry for these.
After searching a lot in the market i finally found it's exact match in the Sony authorized showroom and they have replaced it with new lens. It has the same warranty period of three years. I will deliver these Digicam to you at your residence address by my self on coming Monday.
Thanks,
Your's Truly
Vijayendra Thakur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 14, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'remembered'.
Suggestion: remembered
...apologize for something. You may have remember that i have borrowed your New Sony Digi...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...igicam last month on my brothers wedding . As you know, we have invited too man...
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Line 6, column 69, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... too many guests in the wedding ceremony .The celebration took place too long and ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...oo many guests in the wedding ceremony .The celebration took place too long and whi...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...e floor and its Camera lens were broken.I remember that you have remind me for pr...
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Line 6, column 243, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'reminded'.
Suggestion: reminded
...ns were broken.I remember that you have remind me for precaution while taking that Dig...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...r precaution while taking that Digi Cam.I am extremely sorry for these. After ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...and they have replaced it with new lens.It has the same warranty period of three y...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ence address by my self on coming Monday . Thanks, Yours Truly Vijayendra Tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, may, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 698.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 148.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71621621622 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26199518616 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.716216216216 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.7501099384 44.8134815571 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 16.8248392259 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212065996863 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106409268633 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613226970113 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137923341338 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413306578917 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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