Write a letter to your landlord about the problem with a water leak in your house. Please say
- What is the problem?
- What is the source of the problem, in your opinion?
- What do you think needs to be done?
Dear Mr. Russell,
I am writing this to bring your kind attention to the water leak issue at your rented house. It has been almost a week that the leakage is flooding my floors and now that the situation is out of my control; I thought it would be wise to quote this headache to you.
<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-04BAB31A36D58808B8FDD33220E0B512" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_795" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: First" data-pwa-suggestions="First" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="Firstly" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done pwa-unused">Firstly</pwa>, it was not distinguishable until I fell from the kitchen step, which could have almost killed me. Although it got me some minor injury on my back, which evoked me to call a local plumber. He suggested me talking to you regarding the concern, as this whole process might involve a little <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-FFD74A94DD3ED6FE406AC275EA48C2F8" data-pwa-rule-id="CRFSR_COST_37" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-hint="Possible confused word" data-pwa-suggestions="coat" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="cost" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done pwa-unused">cost</pwa> and wear-tear. <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-7020BB066A54A821FD9DE8D1414146D4" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_1100" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: There" data-pwa-suggestions="There" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="It seems to me that there" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done pwa-unused">It seems to me that there</pwa> is some major issue with the main drainage pipe, which I assume <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-28C69D167522717BFF79429F1784BCE7" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-suggestions="" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="is blocked" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done pwa-unused">is blocked</pwa> somewhere.
I am afraid this could be messy if not given a solution. Therefore, I suggest you get some time on the weekend and bring an experienced plumber to look into this matter. I understand you are a busy man, but I <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-6D9A6E443F67AE4A1B30C8227A8F7CD6" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_1102" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="personally " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done pwa-mark-ignored">personally</pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-6D9A6E443F67AE4A1B30C8227A8F7CD6" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_1102" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-dictionary-word="personally " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done pwa-mark-ignored"> </pwa>feel that your presence would be great to give a solution to this.
Look forward to your prompt response.
Yours sincerely,
Amit Padam
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, may, regarding, so, therefore, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3201.0 937.175257732 342% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 304.0 206.0 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 10.5296052632 4.54256449028 232% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 13.1633964649 2.54303337028 518% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 181.0 127.690721649 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595394736842 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 865.8 290.88556701 298% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.8 1.41237113402 198% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 284.344079516 44.8134815571 635% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 266.75 76.5299724578 349% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 16.8248392259 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0253467846314 0.216113520407 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486015398923 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629711605105 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774993058665 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653639705413 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.8 8.37731958763 487% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -55.42 70.7449484536 -78% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 3.82989690722 381% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.2 7.45979381443 365% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 44.09 8.71597938144 506% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 41.2886597938 211% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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