Write a letter to your landlord complaining about noise in the block of flats which he owns You should include Where you live The problem What he should do

Essay topics:

Write a letter to your landlord complaining about noise in the block of flats which he owns.

You should include:

Where you live
The problem
What he should do

Dear James,
I am writing to complain to you about the loud noise from the neighboring apartment which you own. Your immediate attention would be highly appreciated.
As for the address, I live in flat I-701, the edge tower, which is next to the other apartments you own. I have been living here for four years and never felt so inconvenient.
With regard to the problem, the tenants from J-block play loud music until late at night and sometimes hosts weekend parties, which is against the rules of the society. Because of this, my Medical studies are getting affected and I am afraid that this would have an adverse ramification on my exam results.
In order to fix this issue, I appreciate it if you could ask them to turn down the volume. And being the owner of the society, I request you to kindly send them the guidelines of the society.
I hope for prompt action from your side on this matter.

Yours sincerely,
Jack

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, as for, i am afraid, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 770.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63855421687 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43635788515 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668674698795 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7897045834 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224047215513 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823352434625 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855853088126 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115994736392 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915290905249 0.0580467560999 158% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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