Write a letter to your manager about a computer system problem that you have encountered and say Describe the problem How it is affecting your work What needs to be done about it
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my concern about the problem my computer has since this morning. It is not booting.
I had a normal shut down after work yesterday. A blue screen had shown today when switched on, followed by the system got off. All attempts to restart the CPU went futile. I do not know the standard procedure to deal with this, and hence, I decided to seek your advice.
Many reports need to be prepared and emails to be replied, as I was on leave for the last two days. If not resolved immediately, it would increase the load of my pending assignments.
I shall be grateful if you could resolve the issue this time. Kindly advise me on the standard procedure involved, too, so that there is no need to trouble you for such matters.
I request you for earlier action.
Yours faithfully,
Name.
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- Write a letter to your manager about a computer system problem that you have encountered and say Describe the problem How it is affecting your work What needs to be done about it
- Write a letter to your manager about a computer system problem that you have encountered and say Describe the problem How it is affecting your work What needs to be done about it 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 702.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61842105263 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42701639617 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.730263157895 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9136976587 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.5 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6666666667 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.08333333333 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204938436302 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547078332541 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488975126581 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862499704733 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480016232224 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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