There have been some problems with public transport in your area recently Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company In your letter Describe the problems Explain how these problems are affecting the public Suggest what changes could be
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my concern about the issues we face from the public transportation facilities in our area for the last two months. Three major issues and remedies are listed below for your kind notice.
Firstly, the timings of buses in our routes are unknown to many of us. This leads to late entries to schools and offices which is not advisable. Apart from that, most of the vehicles are emitting dark exhausts that pollute the entire area for a long time. Finally, there are a total of nine abandoned buses on the streets after they were broke down. Because of long time, those have become habitat of snakes and birds which is again dangerous for kids in that locality.
As a remedial measure, our residents association has listed out a few steps to be taken soon. Provision of time charts at the bus stops would alleviate the existing confusion about the vehicle arrival time to a certain extent. Perhaps, the authorities might see to it that the timings are followed strictly by the staff. It would be excellent if a check up and updation of exhaust gases based on current environmental standard at once to curb the pollution problems. And please take necessary steps to shift the abandoned buses to garages immediately.
An earlier action on the above would be appreciated.
Yours faithfully,
Name.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 278, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'totals'?
Suggestion: totals
...a for a long time. Finally, there are a total of nine abandoned buses on the streets ...
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Line 9, column 54, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion on the above would be appreciated. Yours faithfully, Name.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88311688312 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56061246445 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670995670996 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7446372597 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5714285714 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0953541960963 0.216113520407 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0288449092426 0.0766984524023 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431153077324 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0558340195661 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060519360954 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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