Write a letter to your manager about a computer system problem that you have encountered and say Describe the problem How it is affecting your work What needs to be done about it

Dear Mr. Rahi,
I hope you are doing well,
I am writing this email to let you know about an issue with my computer that happened today. While I was working with AutoCAD regarding a design project, the computer crashed and jumped out of the software. Initially, I taught that it is only a simple bug, but it is not, I am afraid.
As you know, the deadline for finishing the design is extremely tight. I hope the problem gets fixed by tomorrow otherwise I do not think that we are able to accomplish the job as scheduled. It is 2 months that I have been working on this project and in case I need to start over, I will lose a lot of time.
Would you please contact an IT specialist to come over and check the computer? Although I have talked with a computer technician today, I believe asking an expert to come in person may save some time for us.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Your Faithfully,
Masoud Safaei

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 26, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
... lot of time. Would you please contact an IT specialist to come over and check the c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, may, regarding, so, well, while, you know, i am afraid

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 755.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31428571429 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39927880321 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662857142857 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9183332936 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183803019429 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612514045546 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354690660426 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760860459093 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296628989496 0.0580467560999 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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