Write a letter to your manager informing him about a party to be arranged in the team and tell him:
1) What the party is about?
2) Why is it necessary?
3) What help do you need from him?
Dear Sir,
I hope you are doing well post your small surgery and are recuperating well. I am writing to inform you about the subsequent developments. Allow me to elaborate.
As you know, Mr. Osborne has been an employee with the company for almost 2 decades and is nearing retirement, but due to some personal reasons he has opted for voluntary retirement. The team has decided to host a small party to show gratitude towards Mr. Osborne.
Everyone in the company is aware of the respect and name that Mr. Osborne has earned within the company and among the suppliers, and as such, we feel it is not wise to let him go without a small gesture of respect towards him.
Further, we need your help in arranging the party for him. We need you to get us in touch with his old colleagues. It will be a very emotional moment for him to have his former team members with him on the date of superannuation. As such, we need you to connect with them and invite them.
I hope that you will help us in hosting a party for Mr. Osborne which will be a memory worth cherishing.
Yours sincerely,
Brad Jason
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47783251232 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51514377625 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581280788177 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0198720746 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.75 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9166666667 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287024118375 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105348420914 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922543478024 0.0603063233224 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136806431041 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694143282707 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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