. Write a letter to your manager to request setting up a cafeteria for the staff.
In your letter, you should tell:
-what you heard about the inconvenience from the staff
-how you feel about it
-what suggestions you have.
Dear Mr.Jones,
I am Rehana Diwan and I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards the real need of the cafeteria for the staff. I feel we must have saphosticated café for all of us, thus I would to make a request to you regarding this.
Well, being senior HR of this organization since 5 years hence very often staff complain me about the cafe, they tend to come to my cabin almost on every other day and try to elaborate their inconvinience due to lack of such facility.
Indeed, I also feel dreadful from them because this is just a mediocre aminity which each and every established venture must have. Not only this is an elementary need but also it can work as a stress buster for the staff members.
I have checked our premises well and I have found one place which I feel would be the best place for this café. That space is back side of our building. Here we can get piece and serenity. Even tress are well planted by the building staff. If upper authority and you found this place useful then please think over this matter.
Hope you will take promt action with this matter.
Yours sincerely,
Rehana Diwan.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Jones
Dear Mr.Jones, I am Rehana Diwan and I am writing th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, regarding, so, then, thus, well, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47115384615 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28253515109 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682692307692 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1446544403 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223981384342 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736762231993 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499354521754 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118061502722 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724634310634 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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