Dear Mr and Mrs Williams,
I am writing in regards to the complaint I have received from you recently. My sincere apology for the inconvenience and problem caused due to my actions and I assure you that I will be more careful in the future about it.
I started learning the piano recently. As you may know, I work full-time and the only free time I am able to dedicate to my classes is weekends. I have hired a piano teacher to teach me during the weekends and I am sorry that the noise reached your flat.
I am sorry about the inconvenience I caused to you and Mrs Williamds. I did not expect the sound of my piano to be so loud and reach your rooms. I totally understand your position and request you to accept my sincere apologies.
As a solution, I have decided that I will continue my piano classes at my tutor's house instead of mine. This way I would be able to continue my practice and not disrupt you.
I hope this unpleasant situation hasn’t hurt our friendship.
Yours sincerely,
Alfred Harris
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...ar Mr and Mrs Williams, I am writing in regards to the complaint I have received from you ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ry that the noise reached your flat. I am sorry about the inconvenience I cau...
^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 71, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ence I caused to you and Mrs Williamds. I did not expect the sound of my piano to...
^
Line 10, column 146, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ano to be so loud and reach your rooms. I totally understand your position and re...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52941176471 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61873792633 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561497326203 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8351350825 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5833333333 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 4.34317383033 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157328003334 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569524183559 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426836137498 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0620137047961 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537013962032 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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