Writing a letter to building manager regarding a problem parking your bicycle.When you started to use bicycle to go to workWhat the problem isSuggesting the solution of the problem.

Submitted by sirisha on Tue, 07/24/2018 - 15:25

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter regarding the parking problem for my cycle in our resident building.

I am sirisha that i am staying since last two years.Firstly,summer is the perfect weather to ride bycle.At the same time i am unable to go to gym to do my routine daily exercise because my office working hours are changed due to project.So that my gym trainer was advised to ride a bicycle which helps to burn our calories and also best cardiac exercise.

Let me explain the main problem is insufficient parking place in our building. In my opinion the other residents also facing this problem.In addition to that it is kind of wasting a time to find a parking place for my cycle.So that I am using outside parking place but it is not safe for bicycles.

I would like to suggest that unused place beside the water tank could be utilized for cylce parking and also this leftover place is sufficient for at least 20 to 40 bicycles.I am so glad if you can solve this problem.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Sirisha

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...resident building. I am sirisha that i am staying since last two years.Firstly...
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Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
... that i am staying since last two years.Firstly,summer is the perfect weather to ride b...
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Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , summer
... am staying since last two years.Firstly,summer is the perfect weather to ride bycle.At...
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Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: At
...er is the perfect weather to ride bycle.At the same time i am unable to go to gym ...
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Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... weather to ride bycle.At the same time i am unable to go to gym to do my routine...
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Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o to gym to do my routine daily exercise because my office working hours are chan...
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Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...orking hours are changed due to project.So that my gym trainer was advised to ride...
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Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'also the best'.
Suggestion: also the best
...le which helps to burn our calories and also best cardiac exercise. Let me explain the...
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Suggestion: In
...ther residents also facing this problem.In addition to that it is kind of wasting ...
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Line 7, column 225, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: So
...me to find a parking place for my cycle.So that I am using outside parking place b...
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Line 9, column 175, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...fficient for at least 20 to 40 bicycles.I am so glad if you can solve this proble...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... glad if you can solve this problem. I look forward to hearing from you. Yo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, regarding, so, at least, in addition, kind of, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62303664921 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6700236082 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628272251309 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.617561436 44.8134815571 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 126.142857143 76.5299724578 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2857142857 16.8248392259 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8571428571 4.34317383033 319% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183604085966 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101110666019 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611476350182 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113869903185 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807485532782 0.0580467560999 139% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 8.37731958763 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 8.15463917526 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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