Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Thulasya Rajakruna who residing in one of your building which is located at Yakkala, Gampaha road. I moved here last month and I am writing this letter to report you regarding a problem that I have been facing since then.
I use my bicycle to commute from home to work and work to home every day. The problem, which I am facing every day is lack of parking slots in the parking area. There are only two of them and most of the time I have no place to park my bicycle as a result of I came home lately from work. Therefore, I park my bicycle in open area near the apartment and seems it is not that much secure.
In order to revamp this, could you please look in to the issue personally and do the necessary changes to solve this problem. As for my knowledge it can be easily achieve by extending bicycle parking since there is enough space over there.
I look forward to hear from you with a prompt solution.
Yours faithfully,
Thulasya Rajakaruna.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ugh space over there. I look forward to hear from you with a prompt solution. You...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, regarding, so, then, therefore, as for, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37096774194 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27434606367 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629032258065 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8980581914 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 4.34317383033 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265051247047 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922867873984 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531865532664 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10564758151 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764175522666 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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