Writing task 1 (a letter)
Apply for volunteering work for a sport event that is going to be held in your city next month. In your letter say
– Why are you interested in this work?
– How could you help during the event?
– Suggest an improvement in some area of the event.
Hello Mr. Jay,
I am.writing this letter to apply for the position of volunteer in the state level Cricket tournament which will be held in next month.
I am working as a Cricket coach in National High School since last 5 years and in next month I am free due to our winter vacation in School so I would like to serve your organisation with my services and I will feel great if I can give my little contribution in this big event as sports is my passion. I can help you in managing the work related to peach arrangements and also help you in organising the equirement required in sports. As I have experience in managing big events I have noticed there were always some loopholes in seating arrangement and services offered to all participants and that's why I suggest you to properly keep the seating arrangement based on ticket class and tighten the security to avoid any chaos. Once, I will receive response from you I can join immediately.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Kind Regards,
Divya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hello Mr. Jay, I am.writing this letter to apply for th...
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Line 4, column 596, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ervices offered to all participants and thats why I suggest you to properly keep the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63333333333 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67565614429 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655555555556 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.039378602 44.8134815571 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 119.142857143 76.5299724578 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 16.8248392259 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280464343145 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101453747898 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668000166595 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169901832968 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719598489798 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.