Yesterday you lost your student identification card. You need to get discounts on public transport and for the cinema, and to use the college library. Even more importantly, you need it as proof of identity to withdraw money at bank.
Write to the Director of Student Services explaining the situation and requesting a new card as soon as possible
Dear Sir/Madam,
I hope this letter finds you well!
I’m writing to you to get your support to approve my request about issuing new indentation card as soon as possible instead of the one that I lost yesterday.
Let me explain my situation, h had lost my identification card yesterday and I tried to find it, but it seems impossible since I have visited many places, in addition to using many transportation ways, as you know the importance of this card as a student I got a 50% discount on public transportation even same discount for cinema, adding to this point without my card I have to pay a full price for the train ticket which its hard to me as a student! More importantly that I should use this card to withdraw money from the bank since the need it as a proof and I will be out of money at the end of this week maximum, one last point is that we are about starting the mid-term exams so I have to lend a books from the library of the university and without my ID card I will not able to borrow any book or prepare myself for exams in fact I can't do or get any student benefit with it!
I really need your support as I already submitted my request for issuing new card at student problems office but they informed me that they need from 2-3 weeks, so I decide to write to you seeking your help and support.
Faithfully yours,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 701, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a book' or simply 'books'?
Suggestion: a book; books
...ng the mid-term exams so I have to lend a books from the library of the university and ...
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Line 5, column 840, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...k or prepare myself for exams in fact I cant do or get any student benefit with it! ...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...help and support. Faithfully yours,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, well, in addition, in fact, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 256.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29296875 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5056058974 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 12.6804123711 16% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 128.0 16.3608247423 782% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 473.174621279 44.8134815571 1056% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 549.5 76.5299724578 718% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 128.0 16.8248392259 761% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.5 4.34317383033 656% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354974471614 0.216113520407 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174968863955 0.0766984524023 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136868709881 0.0603063233224 227% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194465486961 0.12726935374 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630652595228 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 62.8 8.37731958763 750% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -33.06 70.7449484536 -47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 49.7 7.45979381443 666% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.79 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.14 7.59969072165 160% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 8.62886597938 324% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 53.2 8.54432989691 623% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 63.0 8.15463917526 773% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.