You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your lettergive details of your visit to the restaurantexplain the reason for

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You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.

Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter
give details of your visit to the restaurant
explain the reason for the celebration
say what was good about the food and the service

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to provide feedback for my visit to one of your restaurants, Faizee. We have been to Gachibowli branch on the eve of 15th June 2018.

One of my close friends is getting married next month and will be moving out of the country soon. To celebrate that, we have organized one small get together to spend some good time with all our friends before she is long gone. Most of my friends were already married so they were accompanied with their families including young children. When we reached the venue, we were welcomed warmly by your staff and they guided us to our reserved tables which were decorated nicely. We did not expect that to happen without informing but to see that all of a sudden, we felt very much welcomed.

The service provided your staff is exceptional given my experiences in other restaurants. Food was tasty, especially the Mutton Biryani that we were fed on that day was one of a kind and all our taste buds got refreshed. The way it was served deserves good amount of appreciation for your staff waiting at the tables. And some of your attendants started playing with our young ones to keep them occupied most of the time, which provided us to have nice conversations which we did not have lately.

We hope you people continue to provide the customers with the kind of service we got the other day and we will plan to visit again.

Sincerely,

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 255.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58431372549 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41867017138 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592156862745 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 27.6144084774 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4166666667 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165191509107 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630422154911 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345347301774 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102733903983 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182184357755 0.0580467560999 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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