You and your colleagues just came back from a foreign language training. Write a
letter to the manager and say
– explain how you and your colleagues enjoyed the training
– suggest more training sessions in the future
– say when and where it should be conducted.
Dear Sanju,
I am very pleased with the information that we have attent the International language training held on 28th April 2018 in Association Center, Delhi.
First up all, they have conducted a lot of fun activities during a training session. Especially quiz competition made the more enjoyable event. Overall participants around 400 that they have split into 10 groups. Competiton happened between this 10 groups. We have really mesmerized about the training center because they have decorated well based on the training content that more meaningful.
The main part is that they have explained about how to communicate with the stockholders. This is really helping our projects to manage with our customers. I am really requesting you to arrange the same training programs for every quarterly in order that all the employees will get the benefit and company growth also will increase it.
I hope that you will arrange the same session for all our team members.
Yours Faithfully,
John
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-06-23 | harmankaur | 78 | view |
| 2018-05-02 | JOHN JEYARAJ | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.727266882 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658385093168 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2748251283 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3636363636 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6363636364 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147808450047 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552283598272 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324943112614 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078578360496 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132058401836 0.0580467560999 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.