You and your family are living in rental accommodation in an English-speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter,
1. introduce yourself
2. explain what is wrong with the furniture
3. say what action you would like the landlord to take
Dear Ms. Green,
I am rahat hussain your new tenants at your building. Currently, I have lived flat A2 in your apartments.
I am writing to complain about that, the furniture at your home is too old to use. Few items of furniture are broken especially in the dining room table. In addition to that, furniture in the living room which contains television become shaky as well. So, we left our television on the ground floor. Since we have two children who have been very naughty in their action which makes us very tensed, we are afraid that children might break our television.
I would appreciate you change the broken furniture as soon as possible. Your kind action on this matter would be highly appreciated. Thank you for your time
Yours faithfully,
rahat hussain
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 158, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly appreciated. Thank you for your time Yours faithfully, rahat hussain
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 651.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 134.0 206.0 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85820895522 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50916120511 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.671641791045 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 193.5 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.017408568 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.1 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137730598053 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600079115729 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566812211553 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108947191105 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570876396851 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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