You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
write a letter to the landlord. In your letter
-introduce yourself
-explain what is wrong with the furniture
-say what action you would like the landlord to take.
Dear Mrs Singh,
I hope you are doing well. I am your tenant from 308 Tri start homes and I am writing this letter in concern with the damaged dining table. I hope you might aware that it has broken leg and one of the chair is missing.
You agreed that, you will replace it with the new set of dining table and chairs soon. However, it is been 4 months since I have shifted to this apartment and I do not see any movement from you. As you know I have 2 kids and a wife living with me, it becomes difficult to sit together for dinner on table with 3 chairs. Also, there is always a risk of food getting spill over due to imbalanced table legs.
I hope you will consider my problem and provide the suitable solution as soon as possible. In my opinion, if a new table set is extremely costly then you can also help us with carpenter who can repair this broken furniture.
I look forward to hearing back from you.
Yours sincerely,
Satrajit
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-14 | Andi777 | 73 | view |
| 2019-12-14 | Ammu helen | 73 | view |
| 2019-11-01 | Singh@141088 | 73 | view |
| 2019-11-01 | Singh@141088 | 56 | view |
| 2019-10-14 | Tolik | 78 | view |
- Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Other claims that men are just as good as women at parenting. 56
- In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping center or mall to do their shopping.Is this a positive or a negative development? 89
- Safety standards are important when building people's homes. Who should be responsible for enforcing strict building codes- the government or the people who build the home? 56
- In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping center or mall to do their shopping.Is this a positive or a negative development? 67
- In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in countryside. some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.What is your opinion about this? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... concern with the damaged dining table. I hope you might aware that it has broken...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, then, well, you know, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27071823204 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16574585635 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662983425414 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1866746135 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.2727272727 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234274995498 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864104551624 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460854497225 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127921261669 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039395267117 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.19 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.