Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Other claims that men are just as good as women at parenting.
Mothers across the world plays an anchor role in a child's life while the child is growing up. This essay agrees with the belief that women are better parents than men. Firstly, this essay will mention the facts of women being a parent and how it is compared with men. Secondly, we will discuss where does men lacks in parenting.
In many countries women are treated as god because they give birth to a child, it is believed that no one cares about the child more than the mother. When it comes to parenting, women express their love ti the child more than men. Women are also more concerned about the child, for instance, if a child is suffering from fever then a mother is always seems worried, on the other hand, father always have a belief that child will get well soon.
Basic attributes of female makes them better parent than men but it does not convey that men does not have importance in parenting. It has been seen that usually child is closer to mother during teenage and post teenage it is contrary. During childhood men acts as a backbone to the family where his presence is felt by the child but it is not expressed by men directly to the child. For example, a father know everything about child's daily routine life even when the child is opening up his or her feelings in front of mother instead of father. Men does not tend to show their direct interest in child's life which makes mother special to the child.
To sum up, both father and mother are important to a child but it is mother's nature which makes women special. Men does acknowledge the fact that a mother is more required to the child than father. These behavioral attributes of women helps the family to bond together which is most important from aspect of parenting.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51572327044 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16703860761 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2137845984 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241609436492 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109513257473 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776623866941 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171406860341 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332807885082 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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