You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
• introduce yourself
• explain what is wrong with the furniture
• say what action you would like the landlord to take
Dear Sam,
Hope this letter finds you in the best of health. This is your tenant Lene, We are living in your house for more than 3 years now. We found it very spacious and well furnished, when we moved in, the furniture was almost new but now I regret to inform you that furniture has broken down. The polish has faded and it needs repairing. However, main hall sofa set is in a better condition. Kitchen furniture requires immediate attention as cabinets are now free of wires that hold them from falling and now they completely comes out when opened. You are aware that we are family of 5 people with 2 kids, so it’s a dangerous situation for us.
I request you to please send the carpenter on priority so that repair work can be started. Moreover, drawing furniture needs to be changed entirely as it’s not in usable condition anymore. Please purchase new sofa’s and table set. I look forward to your prompt response.
Yours Sincerely,
Lene
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, Hope this letter finds you in the best o...
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Line 2, column 520, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'come'
Suggestion: come
...em from falling and now they completely comes out when opened. You are aware that we ...
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Line 4, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...your prompt response. Yours Sincerely, Lene
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68235294118 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44697398043 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.711764705882 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5270995857 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.3333333333 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184615417688 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667140565033 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641298015279 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119518109148 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355183210675 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.