You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
write a letter to the landlord. In your letter
-introduce yourself
-explain what is wrong with the furniture
-say what action you would like the landlord to take.
Dear Mr. Samith,
i am your new tenant from apartment number 568, Harrison street. I have moved in with my family one month ago. I am writing this letter to appraise you with some problems that I am dissatisfying with the condition of some furniture and materials.
When I signed the lease it was told to me that there are all appliance in a good quality but there are on household furniture are very bad condition. Firstly fear of sofa in the room is looks very bad and there are scratches on the table. it seems like very poor quality.
I have signed a lease of one year with you. So,it is your responsibility to provide me best apartment service and this problem needs immediate action. I want to say that please you should change all the household furniture as soon as possible.
Hoping for a promote action from your side .
Your sincerely,
James
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-14 | Andi777 | 73 | view |
| 2019-12-14 | Ammu helen | 73 | view |
| 2019-11-01 | Singh@141088 | 73 | view |
| 2019-11-01 | Singh@141088 | 56 | view |
| 2019-10-14 | Tolik | 78 | view |
- You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.write a letter to the landlord. In your letter-introduce yourself-explain what is wrong with the furni 80
- You are working for a Company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.Write a letter to your manager. In your letterexplain why you want to take time off workgive details of amount of time you needsuggest how your work 100
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Samith, i am your new tenant from apartment numb...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
Dear Mr. Samith, i am your new tenant from apartment numbe...
^
Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...go. I am writing this letter to appraise you with some problems that I am dissati...
^^
Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'appliances'?
Suggestion: appliances
...se it was told to me that there are all appliance in a good quality but there are on hous...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...d and there are scratches on the table. it seems like very poor quality. I hav...
^^
Line 7, column 48, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...signed a lease of one year with you. So,it is your responsibility to provide me be...
^^^
Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'me the best'.
Suggestion: me the best
...So,it is your responsibility to provide me best apartment service and this problem need...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ousehold furniture as soon as possible. Hoping for a promote action from your si...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...re as soon as possible. Hoping for a promote action from your side . Your sincer...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 43, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ping for a promote action from your side . Your sincerely, James
^^
Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion from your side . Your sincerely, James
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, look, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 716.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64935064935 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52797871407 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5916980479 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0909090909 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216999449187 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751032116076 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723298298922 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112909891454 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924999219113 0.0580467560999 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.