You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
• introduce yourself
• explain what is wrong with the furniture
• say what action you would like the landlord to take
Dear Mr David,
I am John, the tenant, who resides in your flat number 25 at Baker Street with my family. I am writing this letter to you in order to express my dissatisfaction with the condition of some of the furniture.
As you might guess, it is the dinner table and its chairs. While I was having a luncheon with my wife and children, one of my children fell down because the chair has a broken leg. Thus, I checked every piece of the furniture and I found three chairs have fractured legs. Moreover, the table seems obsolete which is unlikely to stand for a few days, and it is not only outdated but also quite small that cannot assimilate our big family.
If it is more convenient for you, perhaps you could simply replace the table and chairs. This would solve the problem without too much cost, so I hope you agree with this proposed solution.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...y dissatisfaction with the condition of some of the furniture. As you might guess, it is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52976190476 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36074010024 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.708333333333 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3446402884 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223357263358 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877327205125 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717556446818 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122578550655 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777690328945 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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