You and your family are moving to another country, and have decided to contact a property agent for assistance. You will say/ask
1. Introduce yourself and your family
2. Describe the type of accommodation you hope to find
3. Give your preference for the location and accommodation.
Dear Mr. Smith,
My family and I plan to relocate to a new country and require expert assistance of you to acquire leased property in the area.
Let us start with an introduction; I practice law and will resettle in Brisbane with my lovely wife, Dr.Ann, and three beautiful children aged 10, 12, and 16. We participate in kayaking, tennis, cycling, and baseball, we consider ourselves as a very active family.
Moving to the heart of the matter, we need numerous factors satisfied with the Brisbane rental property. Without question, we must acquire a two-story villa that possesses five bedrooms, laundry connections, indoor spa, and three bathrooms. Besides all these attributes, my wife considers herself a professional gardener, and thus the house should hold a large backyard for agricultural purposes.
As Brisbane newcomers, we will lean on your assistance in discovering a perfect neighborhood location. We hope you can secure a house in a neighborhood surrounded by kid-friendly parks, the facilities for above-mentioned activities and top-rated schools. Lastly, the suburbs present less aesthetic appeal; we prefer an inner-city residence.
We hold high expectation and hope that you can secure a perfect accommodation for our relocation.
Yours sincerely,
Arun Francis
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o acquire leased property in the area. Let us start with an introduction; I pra...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Ann
...tle in Brisbane with my lovely wife, Dr.Ann, and three beautiful children aged 10, ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...der ourselves as a very active family. Moving to the heart of the matter, we ne...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ge backyard for agricultural purposes. As Brisbane newcomers, we will lean on y...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al; we prefer an inner-city residence. We hold high expectation and hope that y...
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Line 10, column 55, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'perfect accommodation'.
Suggestion: perfect accommodation
...xpectation and hope that you can secure a perfect accommodation for our relocation. Yours sincerely...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fect accommodation for our relocation. Yours sincerely, Arun Francis
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, lastly, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53266331658 4.54256449028 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15896999623 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683417085427 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6407621993 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.090909091 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191714943857 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717893774382 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064387279208 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109969981208 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731903309881 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 8.37731958763 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 70.7449484536 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 8.71597938144 166% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 7.59969072165 131% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 41.2886597938 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.