You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel.
Task: Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements.
1. Let them know when you will be arriving and leaving.
2. What type of rooms you would like.
3. Ask them how much the weekend will cost.
4. Also, enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to request advance booking arrangements for my family and I, as we are planing to visit Toronto side river next weekend on November 16th till the 21st of same month.
Therefore, I would like to check if there are room availabilities during that dates. However, we are 2 adults and 3 kids. Thus, we really appreciate if you could please have a big room that consists of 3 bedrooms, one of them a master with king size bed, and at least one large balcony with river view. Moreover, I also would be extremely grateful if you could please send me by email the average prices of such these rooms during peek days and what extra service does it include such as dinner, breakfast , or spa.
Finally, as it will be the first time for us in Toronto Side River, you are kindly requested to explore for us the most interesting activities and entertainments that might match all of us, also, it would be so helpful if you list some places to visit during our trip there.
I look forward to receiving your supportive response.
Best regards
Bilal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to request adva...
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Line 5, column 506, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...oes it include such as dinner, breakfast , or spa. Finally, as it will be the ...
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Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur supportive response. Best regards Bilal
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Line 12, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rtive response. Best regards Bilal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, therefore, thus, at least, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64948453608 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49998816565 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.711340206186 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.3021836668 44.8134815571 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 112.75 76.5299724578 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.125 4.34317383033 279% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206739170717 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651678239492 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044823059251 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962551190109 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459428841503 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.