Dear Trump,
I hope you are enjoying the summer. The purpose of this letter is to remind you about our most exciting and awaited picnic plan in country-side. I recently collected few items which are mandatory and useful at the camping site. My item collection list has all the camping gear, cooking vessels and food sufficient for the complete stay.
In my online search, I came across adventurous activity near our camping site and I think it’s worth visiting these places. The nearby river is very famous for fishing and also recommended for swimming. Luckily if we catch some fish then we can have delicious and fresh food. we can do some hiking in the mountain area; the trail is only 3 miles with stunning views of the ocean. We can take pictures of some scenic spots as well.
Although I had gathered most of the essentials, I suggest you bring the fishing rod and
Bait. We also need sleeping pads, so please collect them from the storage facility close to your home. Don’t hesitate to reply with suggestions and queries.
Yours truly,
Abhi.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...n we can have delicious and fresh food. we can do some hiking in the mountain area...
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Line 7, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I suggest you bring the fishing rod and Bait. We also need sleeping pads, so ple...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, well, i think, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84782608696 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4231817965 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.711956521739 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0294688062 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6153846154 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1538461538 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160454208812 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533538899484 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343485015297 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750279195278 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172361872587 0.0580467560999 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.