You and your friend are planning a picnic in the country side. Write:
• Which arrangements you have already done?
• Other activities that can be done
• How can your friend help with the arrangements?
Dear Sam,
It`s been so long since we last travelled together for a trip. I hope you are well! I`m writing about our next vacation to the rural area in England.
I have everything organized, as I collected several information about that area of England. When I browsed the map, I found many places to visit, and activities to be done. It has a large lake where we can practice our favorite hobbies, such as fishing and boat trip. The area is located beside a mountain and astonishing landscape, and the scene from above would be so inspiring and refreshing.
Recently, the council opened a new entertainment area, and it opens till late night. Therefore, I would recommend if we tried to catch it before closing. The area has also a small zoo with a lot of international animals where brought from Africa, we can book two tickets online if you are interested.
My care is a compact sedan type, and it won`t fit our luggage. I would therefore request that we go with your four-wheel drive car, as it will be more suitable for such picnic. It can also be used if we intended to drive up to the mountain.
Best wishes,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 45, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some information'.
Suggestion: some information
...ve everything organized, as I collected several information about that area of England. When I brow...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6862745098 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66468351864 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9551933639 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5384615385 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6923076923 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149389720104 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455121478171 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449585467534 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842867682059 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255442027939 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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