You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.Write a letter to formal teacher. In your letter :Give detail of the job Explain why it is important to you Suggest what information your teacher could out in the reference.

Good day Mr. Ajibade,

My name is Uwana Essienette, I was one of your student in Mass communication department at the university of Lagos.

I graduated in 2007.

I am writing to request for a reference letter form you to enable me get a job as a reporter at National Television network.

The role I applied for is Senior reporter and I mentioned that I worked with you during my school days in writing and editing news stories for the campus magazine.

I will appreciate that you include in the letter my activities as the editor of Unilag News Magazine from 2004 to 2007.

The letter will enable me get my dream job and I would really appreciate your assistance.

Please send me a scanned copy once it is ready.

Regards
Uwana

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ne of your student in Mass communication department at the university of Lagos. ...
^^
Line 9, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... mentioned that I worked with you during my school days in writing and editing ne...
^^
Line 11, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mpus magazine. I will appreciate that you include in the letter my activities ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
really

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 630.0 937.175257732 67% => OK
No of words: 132.0 206.0 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77272727273 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38956122427 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69501120581 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 127.690721649 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 197.1 290.88556701 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2199152104 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 4.34317383033 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204224693165 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074207175426 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710207524673 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748533767432 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707050784334 0.0580467560999 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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