Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a student of your college late evening computer programming class that is on Thursdays and I am writing this letter to express an issue that I have been facing regarding that course.
This class is all about computer programming in PHP and MySQL and It should be more practical sessions than the theoretical parts. But it has been three weeks now and there is no single practical session held. I have enrolled in this class mainly because, at the time of course enrollment it was communicated as there will be more practical sessions in this class, but there seems to be none to date.
It would be really grateful if you could change my course to another one that has more hands on experience than this one like programming in java that is on Monday evenings. I know regarding that class since one of my friend has taken it on last summer.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Thulasya Rajakaruna.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, regarding, so, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68823529412 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5301572089 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.4752658521 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.625 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 4.34317383033 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114083397709 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052397665598 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543587622211 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658702564655 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572751129789 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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