You are attending a night course in the school. You are not happy with some parts of the course. Write a letter to the school director about this.
In your letter, you should say:
-which course you are studying
-what things you are not happy about
-what you expect the school director to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my concerns related to the crash course which has been opened recently at your Technological Institution.
I am studying the advanced concepts of software engineering course in your school. However, the course curriculum does not have the latest technical concepts which are been used in the industry. It only covers the part related to coding in python, but the main focus should be on three updated topics that are web-based, data science, and automation technology. As a result, the course has not enhanced our skills instead we have practice the same outdated content.
Therefore, I plea you to please reform the syllabus of the software engineering course with the latest concepts of the tech industry by organizing a meeting with well-experienced software engineers of the IT companies. I think you will be able to rectify the problems with the current course curriculum and will update it as early as possible if you will consider my request in looking to your crash course current topics.
I am hoping to hear a positive response from your end.
Yours sincerely,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cently at your Technological Institution I am studying the advanced concepts of s...
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Line 6, column 253, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
...art related to coding in python but the main focus should be on three updated topics that ...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...e practice the same outdated content Therefore I plea you to please reform the syllabu...
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Line 8, column 200, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...h wellexperienced software engineers of the IT companies I think you will be able to r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03723404255 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6752040745 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601063829787 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 188.0 16.3608247423 1149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 947.0 76.5299724578 1237% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 188.0 16.8248392259 1117% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 65.0 4.34317383033 1497% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286109525791 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.286109525791 0.0766984524023 373% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138193829473 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854057129911 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 96.3 8.37731958763 1150% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -119.34 70.7449484536 -169% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 76.6 7.45979381443 1027% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.14 8.71597938144 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.33 7.59969072165 228% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 8.62886597938 661% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 77.2 8.54432989691 904% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 77.0 8.15463917526 944% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.