You are currently trying to improve your knowledge of a language which is not your originallanguage. You have a friend who speaks this new language perfectly. Write to your friend,Explaining why you want to learn this new languageAsking him/her for sugges

Dear Sam,

Hope you are doing great!

I am writing this letter to ask you for the help which is about my French study that has started recently, if you are able to let me know who can learn it faster that I am so appreciate.

I work in an international trade company which the France customers increasingly fast, I realised if I could speak or email them over French so I will have more chance to gain sales opportunity. At the end of the year, the promotion for me is become believable. I know you used to study French few years ago so I think you still in connection with someone who understand how to learn it as soon as I can.

I understand this is kind of urget request for you because I know you vacation is on next week. If possible you ask you friend who has French skill and come to my house to have aftertea together. Firstly, you intruduce them. Seconly, we have some small talk for learn language quickly. Thirdly, ask someone who likes to give me suggestions about this.

Thank you for the help in advance.

Kind regards,
Joe

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, still, third, thirdly, i think, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40306122449 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45642469504 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2245960807 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4545454545 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302076121424 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11480324865 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694221965131 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174984989248 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709058341513 0.0580467560999 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.