Dear Mr. Thomas,
I have recently agreed to rent your apartment and supposed to move there on the 1st of July. I am afraid I cannot do so in August due to a sudden family event. I am hoping that you would allow me to move into your flat at the beginning of August instead.
The problem is that I have to travel back to my home country India for my cousin's wedding since I got a personal invitation from his father. His father is my beloved uncle, and my presence is utterly important because I will be the head member of my family after my late father. And, I have to stay there for family rituals. Apart from this, I have been from home for at least two years. Thus, it would be a great chance to reunite with my family, friends, and relatives. I am not sure about how long I will be staying at my home, but it would not be for more than a month.
After coming back to town, I will be shifting to your apartment in the month of August due to the current situation came up. I hope you would understand this present busy time to spend with my family.
I look forward to seeing you on my return.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...in August due to a sudden family event. I am hoping that you would allow me to mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, thus, apart from, at least, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.20909090909 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2232059347 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577272727273 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3649057261 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2307692308 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9230769231 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230178691442 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868489364583 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655505580493 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16542768779 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687195334284 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.84 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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