You are due to start new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter
• Explain your situation
• Describe your problems
• Tell him/her when you think you can start
Dear sir,
I would like to thank you for the opportunity for the part of your organisation. I was recruited for the position of database administration and my due to start is 12th August. However, I regret to inform that on personal emergency I will be travelling to my home town today. Request you to postpone the joining date for next week.
Unexpectedly, my sister's marriage prepone to Monday. my parents are tense . As, I am the elder of the family and has huge responsibilities. With in this short duration, need to wind up all the weeding preparations in In time for the alliance to happen smoothly. It's implossible to join on the date mentioned in my offer letter.
I apologise for putting you in uncomfortable situation. I trust you understand my circumstances and allow me to take up the job next week. I am keen to join the organisation.
Looking forward hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
abc
- You are due to start new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter•Explain your situation•Describe your problems•Tell him/her when you think you can start 73
- : You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I would like to thank you for the opport...
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Line 2, column 333, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ostpone the joining date for next week. Unexpectedly, my sisters marriage prepo...
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Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ek. Unexpectedly, my sisters marriage prepone to Monday. my parents are tense...
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Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ectedly, my sisters marriage prepone to Monday. my parents are tense . As, I am ...
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Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...y sisters marriage prepone to Monday. my parents are tense . As, I am the elder ...
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Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...prepone to Monday. my parents are tense . As, I am the elder of the family and ha...
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Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sibilities. With in this short duration, need to wind up all the weeding preparat...
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Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...to wind up all the weeding preparations in In time for the alliance to happen smoothl...
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Line 4, column 141, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...allow me to take up the job next week. I am keen to join the organisation. Lo...
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Line 4, column 158, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...up the job next week. I am keen to join the organisation. Looking forward hear...
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Line 8, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g from you soon. Yours faithfully, abc
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79245283019 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14818896352 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647798742138 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9788804167 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.4285714286 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.3571428571 16.8248392259 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.21428571429 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236002188228 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761610993858 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713457896396 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135963925667 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729281609322 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.32 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.