Dear Ms. Ann
I am writing this regards to the issues that need an attention as soon as possible. The issue is related to the new project that the company is working on. Due to the changes in the European regulations there are some changes over the price, roaming and call rate.
Initially, the staff were provided with the information of the changes and solution to be followed. But now I am getting lots of similar complains from many customers as the price and roaming rate which was mentioned were not the same. On pulling call tracks of different employees, I realized the prices given are contradicting the actual price.
Even I had the same complain from different teams that the provided information are incorrect. This need to be resolved as this cause a major conflict between the companies and the clients. I have checked with the technical back up team about the variations of the charges, however, the system does not read the changed price.
At the point of time, I would really suggest to uphold immediate meeting to resolve this issue. Also, we need to educate the staff about the system issue and teach them to counter the clients for the time being. I would suggest to give some freebies to the customers as a goodwill. So that they would be satisfied for the moment.
I am awaiting for the prompt response.
yours sincerely,
Sean Mccarthy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 38, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest upholding'.
Suggestion: suggest upholding
... At the point of time, I would really suggest to uphold immediate meeting to resolve this issue...
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Line 11, column 6, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: awaiting; waiting for
...d be satisfied for the moment. I am awaiting for the prompt response. yours sincerely...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...am awaiting for the prompt response. yours sincerely, Sean Mccarthy.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 238.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8025210084 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5066009881 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7867215244 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8666666667 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26666666667 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0789210964553 0.216113520407 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0291105097522 0.0766984524023 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408083730691 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0299797857997 0.12726935374 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03141662282 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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