Dear Mr Guptha,
I am writing this letter to request you that, I'm experiencing a bad financial problem so, I could pay my two months rent as soon as possible.
As you know that I changed my company recently and my previous company has to clear the last month salary cheque. So I have shortage of money.I am staying in this house from two years and you know very well about my punctuality for paying every month rent. I assure you that I will pay the last month and this month rent as soon as I get my salary from current company. I hope you will understand my situation.
Awaiting for a fruitful reply from you.
Yours faithfully,
Madhavi Chenna.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Mr Guptha, I am writing this letter to request you ...
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...riting this letter to request you that, Im experiencing a bad financial problem so...
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...two months rent as soon as possible. As you know that I changed my company re...
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...ary cheque. So I have shortage of money.I am staying in this house from two years...
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...s I get my salary from current company. I hope you will understand my situation. ...
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...pe you will understand my situation. Awaiting for a fruitful reply from you. ...
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Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: Awaiting; Waiting for
...y situation. Awaiting for a fruitful reply from you. Yours f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, as to, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 26.3917525773 30% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 549.0 937.175257732 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 120.0 206.0 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.575 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.30975091965 3.78020617076 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43172035582 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 127.690721649 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 157.5 290.88556701 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9640848063 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4285714286 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313176263929 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15326108729 0.0766984524023 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525253640744 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203640868516 0.12726935374 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603966110333 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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