Dear Gabe,
Hope your day is going great. I know we have had a great season, but I will be leaving the team for a while. I will be leaving because I lost my dad yesterday. After we came back from training yesterday morning, I received a call, and I was told my dad is dead. It was revealed by the operatives that my dad was driving his bicycle when he was hut by a car. It was very unfortunate.
However, you know I love the team so much, and my love will be with the team while I am away. Since I was transfered to FC Sharks, I have always felt at home. In fact, I love my team to the moon and back!
So, I am going to be back before the end of the month of March. When I got the call yesterday, my mum told me that planning the funeral will take two months, so that's why I mentioned the resumption date earlier.
Can't wait to hear from you.
Adam.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Gabe, Hope your day is going great. I know we ...
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Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ng the funeral will take two months, so thats why I mentioned the resumption date ear...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: Can't; Cannot
...tioned the resumption date earlier. Cant wait to hear from you. Adam.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, while, as to, in fact, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 691.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.97126436782 4.54256449028 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20944686215 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4791347585 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.8181818182 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233615649181 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878961412903 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093925589769 0.0603063233224 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151794108602 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0971317252618 0.0580467560999 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 8.37731958763 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 70.7449484536 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.45 8.71597938144 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.29 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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