you are a football player, but you have to leave the team for a while, write a letter to your team mate and say
why you have to leave
how much you love the football team
when you are coming back
Dear Smith
I hope my letter finds you sound in wind and limb. I am writing this letter to inform you about my absence in a team ,for a certain amount of time.
I want to let you know ,I have to leave the team for few days because of some reasons. The first and the foremost reason is I am going abroad for looking after my sister because she got injure in an accident. Her husband is not with her. He is in another country on a business trip. Apart from this,her baby is 4 months old. Therefore I have to go for such reason to care and support her.
it is undoubtedly fact that I have given my best for getting selected in this team. As from my childhood this was my dream to get selected in such excellent players teams. Basically, I have done huge struggle for taking the opportunity for becoming the part of this team. Last time if you remember I have missed my final exam for the sake of giving a trial of football.
I know after two months, the final match is going to be held and we have to give our best. Therefore, to keep this matter in mind. I will come one month before the finals for practice. It would be grateful if you could let our coach know about my absence because in the rush, I forgot to inform him about it.
I hope you will understand my situation and manage the team for the time during my holidays.
With regards,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Smith I hope my letter finds you sound in wind...
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Line 5, column 117, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...to inform you about my absence in a team ,for a certain amount of time. I wan...
^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...eam ,for a certain amount of time. I want to let you know ,I have to leave t...
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Line 9, column 23, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...unt of time. I want to let you know ,I have to leave the team for few days be...
^^
Line 9, column 299, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , her
...ntry on a business trip. Apart from this,her baby is 4 months old. Therefore I have ...
^^^^
Line 9, column 326, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...art from this,her baby is 4 months old. Therefore I have to go for such reason to care an...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ch reason to care and support her. it is undoubtedly fact that I have given m...
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Line 13, column 85, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...best for getting selected in this team. As from my childhood this was my dream to ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, therefore, apart from, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 262.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27099236641 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17882775081 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564885496183 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.9 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8872882678 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.1666666667 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5555555556 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2820506417 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897453376627 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939678726078 0.0603063233224 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18251948197 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059915890176 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.89 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.14 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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