You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
- Give details of your study plans
- Explain why you want to get a part-time job
- Suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Ahmad,
I want to tell you that my flight has booked for the next week. So, I will come to Canada, and I'll hope to see you again, afterwhile. But I have much stress about my life in there.
As I told you in my last letter, I have an English course at York University, so I should spend three days of the week from 9 to 16 in the English department, but hopefully, that university has accommodation for my living period.
I think you have much knowledge about the job vacancy in the Toronto, so please let me know about par-time jobs, that I can find in there, and is that enough for my routine life because I haven't much money to pass my life.
Can you help me to find a suitable job near the university or give me some advice about how I can see the job.
I'm looking forward to hearing about your helpful information.
Best Wishes,
Mohammad Reza
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...xt week. So, I will come to Canada, and Ill hope to see you again, afterwhile. But ...
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Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...at enough for my routine life because I havent much money to pass my life. Can you ...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 9, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help me find' instead.
Suggestion: help me find
... much money to pass my life. Can you help me to find a suitable job near the university or g...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... advice about how I can see the job. Im looking forward to hearing about your h...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 710.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32926829268 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38628966101 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628048780488 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.9858719205 44.8134815571 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.75 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216202189408 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905223170806 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580797529848 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121838802853 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357159560986 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.