You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• give details of your study plans
• explain why you want to get a part-time job
• suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear James,
Hope everything is well! Did you know that I am coming to Canada by end of this month. I am writing this letter to enquire about the part-time jobs available there and assist me to get the same.
I am arriving on 1st April and have planned to stay with my classmates for a while near waterloo as my post-graduation course in Big Data Solutions Architecture starts in Waterloo campus on 9th April. Meanwhile, I will have to look out for a part time job for savings to pay next term fee.
Instead of waiting and searching for job when landed, I think it would be better if I could find a part time job to start from first day without wasting time. As you have been there for a while you might be having contacts to refer me for the jobs as our profile is similar. I am open for any kind of jobs.
It would be grateful if you could help me find a job as soon as possible. Also, if you need anything from India let me know beforehand so that I could arrange and bring it for you.
Best wishes,
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...eanwhile, I will have to look out for a part time job for savings to pay next term fee. ...
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Line 4, column 100, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...nk it would be better if I could find a part time job to start from first day without was...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, well, while, i think, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.14720812183 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33004323931 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619289340102 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1804650233 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255487842566 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10048214439 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699684180864 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160391601305 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063648098742 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.79 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.