You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
give details of your study plans
explain why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear John
Hello! How are you? Its been too long to meet. I have a good news for you. I am coming to your native place for my post graduation, next month.
I a inscribing this missive for your guidance. I have choosen 'Microbiology' course for my further studies in XYZ college of Melbourne city. As, you know in this ever increasing expenses society, it would be difficult to manage the fees of University amd also the accomodation. So, I would like you to find a suitable part time job for me. So that I can manage my tuition fees. I am willing to do any job. You can ask your relatives and friends for any kind of help in gardening, nanny work. It would be easy for you to search it as you are local resident. It would be grateful.
Waiting to meet you and your family soon.
Yours truly
Anand
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good news'.
Suggestion: good news
... you? Its been too long to meet. I have a good news for you. I am coming to your native pla...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... for my post graduation, next month. I a inscribing this missive for your guid...
^
Line 5, column 3, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...or my post graduation, next month. I a inscribing this missive for your guidan...
^
Line 5, column 3, Rule ID: I_A[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am' (first person of "to be")?
Suggestion: am
...or my post graduation, next month. I a inscribing this missive for your guidan...
^
Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...cribing this missive for your guidance. I have choosen Microbiology course for my...
^
Line 5, column 317, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...So, I would like you to find a suitable part time job for me. So that I can manage my tui...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o find a suitable part time job for me. So that I can manage my tuition fees. I am will...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 659.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33552631579 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42882583661 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664473684211 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4533870284 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 43.9333333333 76.5299724578 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.1333333333 16.8248392259 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.06666666667 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439933518227 0.216113520407 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141637129148 0.0766984524023 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105024277575 0.0603063233224 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287347478745 0.12726935374 226% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702937726735 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.1 8.37731958763 49% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.41 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.