Dear John,
It's been a long time since we met, I hope you and your family are all well! I' m writing this letter to seek your help in my job hunting whilst I' m completing my post-graduate degree in United Kingdom, where you live.
As you know, I' m keen to studying in one of the world-famous universities to boost up my academic credentials, and I' ve sent multiple applications for enrolling their post-graduate 2-year courses of professional management. After, I received an admission offer from Oxford on my interest last month. I was immensely happy and shocked. So, I will be in England in next month.
I' ve applied for study-sponsorship from the local government youth study allowance, however, the allowance will not pay-off my utilities fee, such as electricity fees and water fees, therefore, a part-time job is essential to support my daily expenses as well as bills.
I know you' ve been working as a human-resources manager for many years and you are very familiar with all the industries. I hope you can give me a hand on finding a part-job, this can help me to solve the financial issues while I' m studying.
Kind Regards,
Eddie
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ear courses of professional management. After, I received an admission offer from Oxf...
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Line 9, column 123, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... very familiar with all the industries. I hope you can give me a hand on finding ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, therefore, well, while, such as, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75621890547 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.093823407 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661691542289 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.5790433092 44.8134815571 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.222222222 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 4.34317383033 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28642906372 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908122648809 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932179884496 0.0603063233224 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168715470321 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0981034699667 0.0580467560999 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.