Dear Omid,
I hope this letter find you and your family well. I am writing to inform you that I am moving to Canada in the light fact that I want to continue my study.
Fortunately, I could get a scholarship for PhD in mechanical engineering from British University. Hence, my departure for Vancouver is soon. As I checked the curriculum of my courses prior, I found two days free at the end of the each week.
Since my scholarship doesn’t cover all of my tuition, so I am urged to get a temporary job. Although my parent ensured they tend to pay all my study expenses, I am personally keen...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 146, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... I would appreciate if you introduce me some of the prominent placement agencies throughout...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd a well-paid and satisfactory job. I am looking forward to hearing from you ...
^
Line 14, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s possible. Yours sincerely, Milad
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, therefore, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61428571429 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85892404796 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647619047619 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8697890753 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.2142857143 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231330857039 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862201621182 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758470050225 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137406943959 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106434688788 0.0580467560999 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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