You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• give details of your study plans
• explain why you want to get a part-time job
• suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Navneet,
I hope you are doing well in your business on foreign land. I am writing this letter to inform you that I got selected at York University in your country for the master’s course in microbiology and my course is a full-time activity for 2 years duration. The course work includes fours semesters with 1 project of 6 months duration. Each semester includes 26 credits, I have to pass at least 100 credits from all 4 semesters to get the certification.
However, the course fee is very high as per my budget, so I have decided to do a part-time job to aid my tuition fees during the study in Canada. My classes will be in morning hours all weekdays at university department after than I will be free to do a job in the evening.
I came to know that you are also living near York University, so you will be the best person for me to help in a job search. I insist you to please contact your local residence regarding any opportunity if they are aware in nearby. Please let me know as early as possible if you come across with the vacancy.
Hope to see you in Canada soon.
Best wishes,
Vishal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Navneet, I hope you are doing well in your busine...
^^^^^
Line 12, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in Canada soon. Best wishes, Vishal
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, so, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43269230769 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60759586842 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6673648012 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8181818182 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28942029123 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101602893247 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836557796943 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163750141572 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673673371317 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.