Hi, didi
Hope this letter finds you in good condition and health. Firstly thank you for accepting my request at the last moment. I am writing this letter to inform you that I going to Thailand on vacation for a month on the 15th of this month with my peers. Finally, my dream is going to come true. We directly go to Naas Vegas hotel. After taking rest, then we headed to Bangkok.
My house is fairly small. It contains a three-bedroom, hall, and kitchen with an attached washroom. In my house, also have two spare bedrooms which are at the top of the stair on the right side. You can sleep there. And downstairs on the left side have a bedroom for my puppy. There also have a garden where you can conveniently relish when it's sunny.
Things that I don’t like, please make sure that you put bins out on Friday night as they collected on Saturday. Furthermore, kindly feed me my dog which is lived top of the floor. If it is possible, sprinkle water into the garden twice a week. If there any emergency arise please call me on 896846770 or mail at pawanchopra000@gmail.com. I will be very grateful to you.
Thanks once again.
See you soon,
Parminder Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I am
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...king rest, then we headed to Bangkok. My house is fairly small. It contains a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an conveniently relish when its sunny. Things that I don't like, pleasure...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re any emergency arise please call me on 896846770 or mail at pawanchopra000@gmai...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55868544601 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72907692712 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676056338028 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1458013515 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.1052631579 76.5299724578 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.2105263158 16.8248392259 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94736842105 4.34317383033 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159431580685 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048202996987 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463415283803 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836185690139 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320409909785 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.98 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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